beautiful.
a superb piece.
I really enjoyed this.

Wow that was so beautifully written. Great imagery! And i like how you used the third person as if in first person and only seeing purely through his mind. I think you portrayed your characters really well. Wow I'm totaly jealous.

Wow. This was brilliant - beautifully written, it just seemed to flow so well. The fact that the characters remained nameless throughout the piece added to the simple beauty of the piece, and overall I just loved it. Amazing work!