So cute. I love it.
Wait...is that a nosebleed coming. Never had one before...

I love it. It was a little bit much at once; I would have liked it to have been split into two chapters so it doesn't seem so monsterous in size, but that's just my opinion. XD But I loved your story. It was great along with your characters. I hope to read more of your writing again sometime soon. XD
~Shik

The perfect fairytale ending for the perfect fairytale! What an amazingly romantic and heroic story-I really enjoyed reading it! It painted such a beautiful picture in my head. I'm a little sad that it's a oneshot, but I think it was a perfect story for the length it had. Looking forward to more!!