i LOVE it haha i love torture stories but not if it happens in real life haha

Nice. That's all this particular reader has to say. Good...well, everything. You're my new fav Grey!

Wow, this is so good, it sort of reminds me of my current project but I won't get into that, mine won't be half as good as this, please write some more!!

I'm sort of curious how you could make a clean version of that...But, at the same time,I don't think it'd be as interesting as this one. I loved this: very disturbing, the kind of stuff I love. A few minor mistakes,but great nonetheless.

The girl remiended my of a friend...
I'm glad she wasn't killed.

Wow. That was so beautifully twisted. I loved every drop of it, every action the killer did. It was written very well, just beautiful.

That was cool. I found it disturbing in the most interesting way. I cant help but think that the 'clean version' would be slightly boring. But its still good :) Love it!

Whoa! Scary stuff - so cold and calculating. Like the premise - 'can I do it?' - and some of the dialogue is truly chilling. Made my fingers curl at the keyboard! Keep writing, it's good.

Other than some errors in tense (past mixes with present) it's, overall, interesting. Although I do have one question: How did she send a text with nails lodged into the joints of her fingers? Follow-up (and this if for my own curiosity): Can you text an SOS to the police?

It needs a better ending.