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for shame. 2009-12-10 . chapter 15
i don't take love lightly.
but i can't question your love.
it's very pretty.
(:
for shame. 2009-12-10 . chapter 18
i don't mind some of the names.
though, i agree. humans are horrible.

but honestly, there are worse things people can do.
i'd be glad that all they did was name-calling.
and sometimes, i use it with friends.
no big deal.
GlitterFicsProductions 2009-11-21 . chapter 18
I seriously love you for writing this.

Now, I'm not gay myself (as you know). However, I was raised in a family where you are taught to respect others for their beliefs, no matter if you share them or not. My uncle is gay, and I have had friends that are gay, and the amount of intolerance in this country just blows my mind. I will admit that I've made jokes before in the company of my own home, but nothing derogatory like "lesbos" or anything like that. I also despise the "f" word for gay people.

Anyway, back to my point. Um, yeah, I really think that the media (& society in general) either need to write more books or make more TV shows & movies that portray gay women (and men) in a positive way. Or even straight women, for that matter. Even though I'm straight, it doesn't mean that I think gay people are disgusting. Far from it. You love who you love.

I don't think you're being too sensitive over this. This is an issue that obviously is very important to you, and if I were in your position, I would feel the exact same way.

There are idiots everywhere. You just have to know how to spot the good people in the crowd of them.
brandi alexandra. 2009-11-21 . chapter 18
I don't think you're being too sensitive at all. You made a good point and I agree with you completely.
Some people are just too immature and stupid to be respectful.
brandi alexandra. 2009-11-04 . chapter 16
Oh, I'm so sorry. :/
Nobody should have to spend their birthday alone. Ugh, your friends and family are jerks.
Coalesce Lacunae 2009-11-04 . chapter 1
Great spirit to it, love the expressiveness.

I'm afraid though that it comes in a bit pale, on a scale of 1 to 10 of 'angsty' this would be a 3.

Maybe try and either (a) use a deeper exploration of the subjective feeling (imagery maybe) to give an intimate view and sense of what it feels like to be a 3 on the 'angsty' scale, or (b) drop the tone of angst completely and go more from a 'feeling lost' angle.

Readers might be more sympathetic to it then.
brandi alexandra. 2009-10-27 . chapter 15
Aww, that's beautiful. :)
Tipsy101 2009-10-26 . chapter 14
I'm the same, I bet most people are.
I'm sure it's not as bad as you think though!
Koala Bear 2009-10-26 . chapter 15
You've made me cry.

You are absolutely amazing, baby. Everything I want, everything I need and then some.

I'm so glad I said yes. Look how far we've come, bella. We've still got so far to go, but we'll make it. We care too much not to.

I love you. More than you'd believe.

xx
Tina 2009-10-25 . chapter 14
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OK. I don't understand why you think you are not sweet, kind, or caring, because you are. You're not a bitch (not in the bad way, anyway :P), so I don't understand why you're beating yourself up. I love you & I personally enjoy your company very much. We all have our off days & I know you never hurt anyone purposely.

x
brandi alexandra. 2009-10-25 . chapter 14
M, I can be the same way.
xx 2009-10-24 . chapter 14
You're not a bitch.

You're my everything.

Come what may.
xx
GlitterFicsProductions 2009-10-12 . chapter 13
Aw.

All I can tell you is to keep your head up, okay? Sometimes things aren't what they seem. I'm POSITIVE that it isn't too late.

Missy, I loved this. It's heartfelt and completely real and comes straight from the heart.

Happy Thanksgiving.
brandi alexandra. 2009-10-02 . chapter 12
Interesting... I like it. :)
GlitterFicsProductions 2009-10-01 . chapter 12
You are Mayhem, indeed. But that's what makes you awesome & it's why I love you. Your craziness rubs off on everyone you meet. It's impossible to be sad or angry with you around.

I won't even mention how much fun we've had since we met. You have opened my mind to so many thing & made me comfortable with myself. I love you for that.

And, of course, who could forget those convos & inside jokes we've had?

I love you.

x
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