Great story. :) Love the humor and is it wrong that I find Greggy adorable? Hehe. And I am totally in love with Seth. Ohoho. And I like Jay's train of thought, so amusing.

Great job! I'm gonna head over to the sequel now. :)

rofl! He is so random! I love it!

Wow that's a long trip. I went from Washington to Florida once, but I took a plane to Ohio. Driving would have been hell. There was five of us and my cousin had to go to the bathroom literally every hour.

Anyway I love to story and how he zones off.

i love this. is there more? or a sequel? please?

woah! that was really good! i can't wait for the sequel!

UPDATE SOON!

Lonely Island RULES. I

Oh yeah, Seth SO wins that round.

:D

Jay is so freaking RANDOM! Didn't he say he wanted to be a cat in like...chapter... 2?

And he's just bringing is back up now?

I like Seth's deal better... more amusing.

:D

lol, I love Jay's reactions to stuff. I liked the last three chapters. They were awesome. you're amazing. Thanks for writing :)

It's over? Really? Okay. It was a really good story. Can't wait to read the sequel.
And hey are you going to continue working on that Ocean one? (I can't remember the title). I liked that one and I'm very curious about what going on with that one.

Kya, I can't wait to read the sequel! And nice ending, though it left a little something to be desired, since it didn't really specify on how Greg died and whatnot. Keep up the great writing!

Did Seth, like, castrate and/or dismember Greggy in some way, shape, or form?? Cause I really wanna know...

heh, Just as I imagined it. Jay never fells to be an idiot xD

LOVE IT!

It's true. We do like shiny things. If I looked out my window and saw something shiny, I'd go see what it was. Kinda stupid but you know what? So's the government, but you don't see people grounding THEM, no do you? Anyways, Keep it up, PLZ!! I LOVE this fic...
Your rambling Reviewer,
Ashton Nightingale