OMG I love, love, LOVE your stories! Please update!

Cute chapter. I really love the two of them together. You should make the next chapter or epilogue split between the wedding and then a few years ahead to have them with children or pregnant. Update soon!

omg! that was amazingness!! i cant wait for the next two chapters! and are you going to show the wedding?? please!!

This was a cute chapter!.. You should do a sequel for David... Update soon!!

Aw I feel so bad for David that he lost Lindsey but glad that Lindsey and Jack got back together. I didn't realize how much David really loved Lindsey until this chapter.. Well good story! and update soon!!

I adore this! =] The sequel and as long as always. Took me about two days to read ;) David met someone new - yay. I felt sorry for that guy. He was so nice. :]

Aw, Jack and Lindsey are getting married soon! Lol, the gift Alex put in. xD Hilarious. I like Angel's personality. Fits in really well with Alex. :)

All in all, I love your works. Update when you can and keep up the good job!

-Spazzlex

I really liked this chapter. I'm so glad taht her family accepted her and Jack's relationship. I bet it would hurt Linsey if they didn't. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I hope that David finds the perfect girl. He deserves someone in his life!

Keep writing! Thanks!

Lol, wow, If I was Jack...I seriously think my heart would've went "BOOM!" with all the jitters

PS

Omg! That was so amazingnes! Are you going to write more? Cuz this was a seriously amazing story & i'm gonna die if you dont :) Thanks soo much for writing this! It was amazingness!! :)

This story is so amazing! I've been read this & the first one since almost 1 & it's now 7 :) You should seriously consider publishing this. I'm dead serious. It's hard for me to find a good book nowadays cause I'm done with the Twilight series by Stephenie Meyer and The Maximum Ride series by James Patterson and the House of Night series by PC & Kristin Cast. I feel soo bad for both of them and i want to kill david so the two can be together again :) I have to go to a party which means no reading so i can't wait to come back & read it!! :) PLEASE tell me you're going to write another one :) Thanks! haha :)

I liked this chapter and teh last, but i'm waiting for more! Can't wait to see what happens with Lindsey's parents and brother. i hope that they accept what happened.

AH! THE SEQUEL TO WHEN IT ALL FELL APART! God I thank you for keeping my sanity intact by writing this.

I liked it! Sorry for not updating last chapter! But I did like it. I like this story.. :D KEEP UPDATING! Fast!

I can't believe that you stopped it there! jk jk! i can't wait for more! keep writing!

Aw mehn! Another cliffy! We need an update here!