And more is revealed! But it was totally predictable. Oh well- I enjoyed it!!

LOL it does kind of scream shojo. But it entertained me! XD
And it is a little obvious where some of the plot is headed. XD

=D I liked this! =3
And it's okay that you didn't give a whole lot of detail, I think it's actually a little better that way because you give the reader a chance to build scenes and characters in their minds instead of handing them extremely detailed drawings and saying "This is how I imagined it." and then pretty much limiting them while they're reading. Bah to detail, I say! It also gives you a chance to reveal things slowly, I think. ^^