So, I first stumbled across your writing a while back with the first Cheyenne story. I noticed the other start to a Cheyenne sequel, so at first I overlooked this one. I'm glad I was looking back through your list and saw it though. Now, if only you would finish this one. :)

Btw, ever thought about just kinda writing Ari's story separate, like a side piece or something? I know you have the rule about 4 main characters, but honestly you have background characters who have personalities (unlike a lot of authors on FP who kinda separate their characters off into these bizarre bubbles of solitude) so that's gotta make up for something, right?

Anyway, I just wanted to let you know someone was reading this story hoping for more. (And perhaps suggest that you might wanna delete the other non-starting sequel?) :) Thanks for posting your stories.

Cool!

Continue writing

Good luck!