Kourtney, what chapter were you on when it was removed?

A publishing company contacted me about the story and requested its best to remove it from the internet. I did add some of the later 50's - 60's on a private website for a few people that were in the middle of the story when it was removed. If you were reading before the 20's/30's then I'm sorry, you'd have to wait for the book! :p

I love your story, but some of the chapters have been removed. Is there any possible way you could get them posted again? Thanks

yes king, you had me completely confused :p

the end? Nah - though a lot of people die, as for natural disasters/ecosystem - its not something I ever thought to address. I mostly likely leave out natural disasters, they still happen, but I have no need to directly report them, maybe indirectly like an assassination during a hurricane, or a revolutionary battle during a firestorm. - other than the blizzard during the Russian attack on perm and after there really hasn't been much weather. I'll make sure to slip it in on a second draft!

As for the Ghouls - I should also note they attack Humans only.. mm that's kinda important huh? -so on that note, the chaos is during wonders for nature killing off the 'parasites' to the world (humans) but at the same time domestic creatures would die - due to all the people manning the farms getting slaughtered.

- lol see, this is what I mean when I tell people who read the first draft to expect it to be somewhat a one-way-path. I often just follow a very narrow tunnel when writing - it's just how i think when I'm writing, that often leaves out the bigger picture. That's why i found a friend a long time ago (who's waiting for me to finish) to help on a second edit simply by asking questions just like yours :)

My bad. Typed in a whole bunch of random letters and accidently hit submit.

Anyway ill make an account then.

Small question isit world war fur or the end of the world?
Based on your writing it seems like the world is drifting more to extintion. Plus just wondering how is the rest of the world doing not just te policaial world. Are their natural diasters popping up, how is the ecosystem being effected. Are more creatures dieing? Wat is being effected by all of this chaoas. And small question are the gouls just targetting Humans o evey living thing?

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*Shuffles feet*, sorry King :s, will post it now :S

you should make an account, that way we can PM back and forth, much easier than making me post reviews to my own story to reply to yah

So when you planning on adding the next chapter

funny you'd mention him - the next chapter (i just finished) is about him :)

But that was only 2 chapter.Plus the story is getting even more interesting.. But wat is going on with Pop. After the goul reports he seems to have anished from the story.

SWETT! nice to see the story isnt dead.

Ha Ha, sorry King Patrick - I have been writing them, but due to limited internet access have been unable to post them. Will add in one of the four chapters I have yet to post right now for yah :)

I think your piece has good potential (and I really haven't read much yet), but just a small thing in the writing which kind of bug me is that I think you really need to start replacing your numbers with written words (ie one instead of 1). But other than that thank you for your story.

when r u going to write the next chapter. it has been over a onth since u added gun play

Worth checking for sure! Pretty intresting. The only negative i can say is its slightly predictable but then again thats not always bad and this is only the first chapter!

Nyssahyo, thanks for the input. You just have to add into consideration, this is a first draft - and does not have a hint of research in it. I do not plan to post some masterpiece on a public website, for obvious reasons.

Most chapters past about 3 have never gotten a second look other than to check for spelling errors (which I still find looking back, but won't correct.)

I count this current post as the 'Bones' of the story. the 'Meat' is what your looking for - and you won't find it here, that is kept to myself.

Questions like what you pointed it will be answered when I get with a beta or editor to smooth out the story.