The end confused me a bit, but I did love the idea of this story.

The only thing I really didn't like was when you typed in CAPS LOCK. I always find that when authors do that it seems to make the story less serious.

But I do like the idea of your character hating fairy tales so much. Also, adding the definition of fairy tales was a nice stylistic touch. :]

Good job.

--Jessie my l o v e
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