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Creepy McSteezerson 2009-01-24 . chapter 1
i absolutely loved this. excellent poem, excellent idea, PLEASE keep writing!
RodeoGirl 2009-01-24 . chapter 1
Wow, I never expected the last line. I love how you turned this rant into hope! Great job! I would make the last line mabey...

Jesus saves.
Instead of
Jesus paves.
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