|Reviews for Pandora's Lock|
| Logical and serene megadeath 1/30/09 . chapter 5
You know something?
I'm undecided about this story-weither I like it or not yet.
But I am interested in it _.
So when you continue...I'll be there.
| FerretsRevolution 1/28/09 . chapter 5
I have to admit, the only reason I even gave your story a second glance was because it was being advertised in the Young Adult forum...After reading a bunch of other horrible stories, I was like, I hope this story is worth it, or I'll just give up on reviewing stories altogether. So, when I opened the story, my expectations were low and I was just hoping that I wouldn't be bored to death.
I was absolutely taken back. This story just grabbed my attention, so much so that I had to turn off the t.v. so I could concentrate more on what I was reading. I really like Cora and Shelby's character, and I think this story has a lot of potential. You started yourself off well because you could twist the story anyway you want without making it seem awkward and there are a lot of opportunities for character development. You've done a pretty awesome Job.
One thing I didn't particularly like was the length of the chapters. They were so short I was wondering why you didn't just combine two chapters together to make it even a little bit longer. Also, you've only given a very narrow perspective of the rest of the student body and their opinions on what is going on. Also, you need to introduce more characters. It's already the fourth chapter and the only characters we truly know are Shelby (because it's her thoughts we're reading about) and Cora (we don't even know THAT much about her). I think it's a great job though, so update soon. Or I will e-mail stalk you until you do. XD
| SignedSealedWritten 1/24/09 . chapter 4
This was a chapter I hadn't read yet, and its awesome. I can't wait to read more about the characters and their powers. and winged peoples are awesome.
| SignedSealedWritten 1/24/09 . chapter 3
Okay, I must be cold because I keep getting chills.
OR, my friend, it is your awesome writing.
I believe its the second. xD
This is an awesome chapter - I love the last line.
| SignedSealedWritten 1/24/09 . chapter 2
You've got three reviews now. xD
And not all are from me!
Anyway, I believe I alrea dy read this chapter. I was seriously sitting there thinking "Okay. Creepy school." When I read this. Don't know why, but the school (hehe) gave me chills.
| SignedSealedWritten 1/24/09 . chapter 1
This chapter gives me the chills - its an amazingly awesome first chapter. It hooks you in.
(by the way, its blondie)
| Maplewing 1/24/09 . chapter 1
I'll offer to help you, but you might want to go through my summaries (which aren't that great) to see if you actually WANT my help. Haha...
Seems like a good story so far. I'm reviewing the prologue right now, so I don't know much yet, but it seems well written and all. It gets you interested and wanting more, which is what prologues (in my opinion) are for.
Nice job with this. :)