|Reviews for The World Chasing You|
| ariadne.masen 1/24/09 . chapter 1
Great poetry. I wish I could banish my fears!
| doctor's diagnosis 1/24/09 . chapter 1
This is great!
I think if you expanded this into a longer poem (maybe ten lines even) it would be amazing. The rhyme isn't forced and the ideas are totally eloquent.