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"Curdled non-existence." Vivid diction!

"Planets would have rotated in the wrong direction if we asked them to." A great depiction of the power of love!

"Our teeth have been perfect ever since we stopped eating." I really like this line--it definitely shows the interplay between staying thin and looking pretty, which will be relatable for a lot of adolescent readers who may struggle with eating disorders and such.

Keep up the great work! :)
-Isca