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Isca 2009-01-26 . chapter 1
"I confuse myself with a hay bail maze and get lost among the
melodies of birds." Stunning imagery! This line is very thought-provoking!

"Elephantine ego." Oh, nice alliteration! Actually, good word-choice throughout! :)
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