Wow, this is amazing.

ugh wow i love this; "the beauty in believing you're lucky to be breathing/although you're not so lucky/not at all" that was amazingly delivered, this really struck me

This poem flows so well! The fourth stanza is relatable, so I liked that. "Henry held his cane in the speeing limousine." This line is just amazing! The internal rhyming! The creativity in and of itself is worthy of praise! Kudos! :)

I am in love with this.
maybe with you,
but i couldn't tell
until i read the title.