I searched Jack Kerouac-inspired/related writings on here, and you are undoubtedly the best author I've read on here (I haven't used this site for years but that's still saying something!)

This is great. The section coming after the first divide, "The more I look at the Art Boy, the more hideous he becomes..." is one of the best things I've read in a while. I've got to go see what else you've written.

That was AMAZING =) I'm sorry I haven't been paying much attention either, but I'm gonna try and catch up because I love your writing. Especially the "Sweetheart, that stuff ain’t gonna come out of the carpet, much less my heart." That was just great. lol. The whole thing flowed fantastically. (P.S. Thanks for your reviews on mine. They made my day) =D

-Gabbie

I liked the poem and all, but there was a certain grossness about it with the urine and puke.

~SirScott

Intense. Very poetic. Okay, I think I'm challenged but you lost me with the She. But other than that. Poetic.

wow Octello this is really great! i absolutely love it! i love the beginning especially, but the word choices, the images, it's amazing! awesome awesome!