Wow, I'm impressed. This is really good! There's a lot of bad poetry on this site, so it's great to see something that has a great rhythm, rhyme, and meaning. Wonderful job!

Utterly beautiful. The words ring true, powerful, and the rhythm is flawless. You did a marvelous job with this poem. Stand strong, continue to persevere, and continue to write! :D

Ty *hug*