Hey! So far it's been interesting
I think it's awesome that you're writing in 3 p.o.v and make each one unique. How do you manage that? I mean, it must be hard to come up with 3 completely differente personalities. So kudos to you for creating this story... I can't wait for you to update!

I absolutely love this story. It's is very different from the Matchmaker, but I like that part. It took me a second to get the Kerouac reference, but after a second it clicked. You may want to explain that somewhat for those who don't know who Jack Kerouac is. Truthfully, I wouldn't have got the reference when I was in high school. It wasn't until I worked at a bookstore that I found out who he was. But anyways, keep up the good work. This is really good so far.

I saw your ad on SKoW and I think part of the reason you may not have gotten as much feedback is because I had no idea you'd written any more! Personally, I enjoyed this beginning a lot. I think Meg is my favorite. I can't decide how I feel about Kevin... Or Connor for that matter... Anyway, update soon!

To answer your question as to why you aren't getting as many reviews and such, I'd say it's two things.

1. Yes, "The Matchmaker" probably hyperbolized your standards as to what people will get on average for a story.

2. I would change your summary a little bit. I don't think I would have clicked on the link toward your story unless it had been for SKoW. Make it a little bit less cryptic, and giving more of an idea about what the story is about.

That's my input. I do love the story, though. It should catch on in a little bit.

Alice Heist

God, reading that argument was like re-living an argument I have with my sister and parents almost every day. I dropped out of college after HS and took some time for myself to do what "I" wanted to do and now all I do is get ** for it. Whatever, I'm happy! :) And I love this story. Can't wait for the next update!

Wow...Meg's a true...ehm...witch. I mean REALLY. And Kevin's not what I had envisioned him to be. Come on! Ripping into Connor like that? That's just plain mean!
But VERY good chapter dude. I Loveth It!

Stories written in multiple point of views are much more in depths since we get insight into each character's mind. I loved her semi-feminism rant, she's a real riot =)

thanks!!

So lovely to see you back here, been a while since the Matchmaker isn't it? Second time reading this and it's still wonderful, as gooda s it was in my memory. Interesting trio, looking forward forward forward to their story! Thanks for the upload =)

while the theory of God creating the earth as seen in christianity is sketchy...Evolution is still just a theory, and an unprovable one at that...there is actually more evidence of a secular intelligent design these days and more scientists are starting to think that our universe was created, not neccessarily by a God but it is becoming apparent that this isn't completely random...and I say all this as a complete athiest so yea...but also there is no way of prooving it one way or another...anywhoo Great Chapterness! good job!

Kevin sounds ultra sweet...a little insensitive towards Meg but oh so sweet towards Kat.
The introduction of Joe made me laugh my head off and I couldn't help but hear the very deep southern accent he must have . . .
You missed a couple of letters in a word and a few grammar mistakes here and there but overall a nice little chapter for the whole story.
I love the direction of this story and I CANNOT wait for the next chapter!!

Jesus, this seems like something I'd actually do with my friends. Plan to do it over summer vacation, in fact, assuming myself and the other mastermind behind the plan can put together a mix of people who won't mind going down random side roads without a set plan or destination.

If you keep writing, I'll keep reading. This has plenty of potential to go places.

Hey! I'm pretty excited to read this story, and the title is pretty fitting.

I'm very excited about this story! I do have to wonder, though, if Connor and/or Kevin will ever end up reading her journal/musings...

I love the title, it's so fitting. This sounds like a real mix, I can't wait to see what they get up to :)

Ooh, I think I'm going to like this. A LOT. (Though it took me awhile to pronounce the title.)

Great first chapter! :)
Can't wait for more. (Oh, but I am wondering if the paragraphs can be a little shorter, because my eyes get a bit tired looking at all of those words put so close together...)