   GrumpySunshine 2009-02-11 . chapter 3Wow. |
 Kyrina 2009-02-10 . chapter 3i like this chapter :P |
 CoryD 2009-01-30 . chapter 2great start - I look forward to the next chapter |
| Kyrina 2009-01-29 . chapter 2 your a good writer and i really like this story, please update soon! |
| CoryD 2009-01-25 . chapter 1 Entertaining start... |
| GrumpySunshine 2009-01-25 . chapter 1 This story is really good!! I like what's going on so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next!! |
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