Now, Natasha isn't so dark anymore.

But Johnny kinda is. Though he's good... the image is still in my head. Even when the sharp weapon burned inside of his body, oh, so beautifully.

I still like Johnny more than Natasha.

Don't know why.

Just do!

ShecklerGirl

I love the ending.

Poor Johnny!

Natasha is kinda evil. But I like evil people. This is different though, in a good way. Because the woman are always the ones who are victims and now, 'Johnny' is the victim so this is interesting. So very interesting.

I'll read the edit in a moment now.

ShecklerGirl

Very polished, the characters are more...formed...now. Great job.

If I wasn't already shocked from the traumas of life this would of done the job. Very chilling, and well written. Although slightly predictable for a horror, would love to know the back drop to this. Natasha was wonderful!