   Bangle Meister 2009-09-19 . chapter 1oh, very intriguing! Was this a story that was taken down? Please say no. And please don't say it's on hiatus! |
 Ashley Watts 2009-07-22 . chapter 1This is really great. I truly cannot wait to read the next chapter - if you write it! |
 remember the name 2009-06-13 . chapter 1I think this is an awesome beginning for a story! It's a cliche but with lots of twist in it. So that's great. I love that she knows everyone's business! Hopefully you continue this!
Take care,
RtN |
 extremedramaqueen 2009-06-12 . chapter 1wow. |
 Dahlie 2009-05-31 . chapter 1i sense drama, tears- i love it.
keep on writing ;)
toodles |
 Hematite Dandelion 2009-05-31 . chapter 1Dude, I love this.
Been looking for something to read since all my favorite authors took their stories off and I was just browsing when I found this little bitchy gem :D Made me happy and curious and I want to know exactly how the main character ended up in this mess and where it's gonna go from here. Yah, it's a cliche, obviously, but the way you started in what feels like the middle of the story and had your main character reveal so much in just the first chapter was kickass and I loved it. I know it's been a while since you've published this according to the date but I think you should keep it going. Plleaase update? :D |
 Squealer the Pig 2009-05-08 . chapter 1I really like this and hope it's not just a one-shot. :) |
 misty 2009-04-22 . chapter 1 liked thqt one too. Its good as a one chapter piece. You captured this girl well in just a short chapter. |
 petitediablesse. 2009-04-21 . chapter 1LOL
I so did not expect that xD .
i ** love this. Do continue (:
i mean.. 40 something reviews for one chapter?
isn't it inspirational enough? :P
c'monn you know you want to.. lol i just so gay right now.. xD |
 A.Cookie.For.A.Kiss. 2009-04-13 . chapter 1I'm so totally loving where this is going, and it is only the first chapter.
I'v read some of the reviews and some say this is a one shot, I hope it isnt. Id love you to carry this on.
Any way hopefully I look forward to the rest =D |
 sarcasm is my middle name 2009-04-09 . chapter 1Wow, for a one-shot that was great!
She sounds like a... interesting person. |
 Den-KitStock 2009-03-31 . chapter 1Haha, I LOVED it! You had me laughing at the end... Please update soon, I really can't WAIT! |
 Scarlet Scribbler 2009-03-30 . chapter 1So it's basically AMAZING. |
| bellusss 2009-03-28 . chapter 1 excellent! really, I haven't had a good laugh in a while and well, you've cured me :D update? |
 nichloe 2009-03-25 . chapter 1Update! The first chapter is already interesting. Can't wait to read more! |
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