Oh my god! You have to continue this, I can totally see you making this into a amazing story.
I am a huge fan of your work, you write in such a descriptive and feeling way that it captivates me as a writer, and if I may say so; inspires me to get off my butt and write more myself.

I've been reading your things for a very long time and really hope you'll start updating again cause we readers need the fix ;)

Thanks again for a awesome read, even just a chapter, and hopefully you'll get inspiration and start finishing all those stories we're waiting for ;)

Peace and Love // Em.

holy crap. I actually like it.

AMAZING!! I like that the girl feels so strongly on solving her brothers' death and the mystery surrounding it. Hopefully you can update soon!!

Take care,
RtN

Its been so long since you put up the prologue..
Are you planning to continue with this or have you abandoned it?
Hope its the former...
Please do update your story...

Wow. I'm already captivated by this. I look forward to reading where you take this story.

I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

Interesting start I like it i hope it won't turn cliche but so far so good! :)

I find this really captivating. Can't wait till the next chapter. (:

Really good beginning. Can't wait to read the rest of it!!
Update Soon Please.

Amazing

This sounds good. Granted, I've heard many with this kind of plot of I have a feeling this will be more original. And there's your reputation. I've heard good things about you on here and other forums too.

And there's the fact that she's 19. Not your usually gang-related/high school romance. And the whole start and meeting is original.

I've been meaning to read your stories. Hope you post soon! And may I know which stories are old and which ones are new ones that you've recently written? Just so I have an idea of when you'll post. *sigh* I really need to make a account soon...but I never stay for long at any forum/club/whatever. Oh well.

wow just wow

Very cool. I like the set up. It reads really dark for a romance, which is refreshing.
Please update soon.

This is definitely one of the most intriguing first chapters I've read in a while on fp. Long enough to pull you in and just short enough to make sure your interest stays piqued. Awesome.

dun dun dun, so the question is, will this take place in another world or not. so the guy see saw, basically 6 years older, that makes him 25. do you write about people around your age? as it if is easier to relate to, maybe, or maybe not. im curious.