I love the imagery you put into it, and the words you used that transmit the feeling of coldness extremely well. The one-worded lines even not rhyming fit in really well too. I like the whole mood of it, very nicely done :)

"Floors of shattered glass." I love that line. It was amazing.

I love the 'house of ice and glass' theme. It makes the whole house just seem cold, it fits nicely, and I really like how you use the word shiver, it really sticks out in the poem. :)

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