plzz write more i cant wait to read more

Gavin is a real bitch...I wanna know where this story leads *-* update soon?

Bleh. Too lazy to long in to my account, so I'll leave a semi-anonymous review.

WHY HAVE YOU NOT YET UPDATED THIS!

I'm waiting.

Don't take too long, I might suffocate if I hold my breath waiting.

Shuu

this made me giggle. haha. gavin sounds like a worse version of me. xD

Luci, please do leave your clothes on... *grins*

I think this story is really interesting. I like it. I like how forthright Gavin is. I also think you are doing a great job a writing this story from his perspective. It flows really well.

Update Soon!

Cari Marie

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Haha I love Gavin He's so deliciously evil it makes me smile. "slop some tards" HA priceless!

lol-ya-gavin's-awesome

im interested. lmao and i do love what i've seen of gavin's personality :D which, i think is a lot considering its only the first chapter/intro-thing xD

:D onwards!

Is it bad that I love Gavin? He's just so mean! Plus I bet something vengeful will happen to him. Or something like that. And Ryan sounds like a cutie. So I instantly love him. :3

Luci i'm home lol... this is already shaping up for a very interesting story can't wait for more installments because god knows when you're writting the ending isn't usually one to be expected. And of course we can't judge you on one characters because not only is it the job of the writter to write what you know but also to create and rebuild as we see fit and to reflect the thoughs and opinions of others as good bad ugly as they may be. of course we will support you in your wtirring i mean as long as you don't turn into a homophobic hetarosexist bitch like alot of others

anyways hun can't wait for an update ttys

Truly yours Blade-of-Sorrow

this story seems really good! i can't wait for more!

thank you

Hello!

Like it so far. Will definitely keep reading. It's too hot to write anything more constructive, damn 40 degree weather! Keep at it.

Love, K.T

fasldkfj I've already told you how much I love this over MSN, ahaha BUT REALLY. It's so fun to read. :'3

And I inspired this omg. *dies* x'3 I ROFL'd at your beginning AN, too, because I kinda felt like you were pimpin' me out. xD

So now you will be dubbed my pimp. 8)

SO WRITE MORE, PIMP! XD

xoxo

Ooh. I am intrigued. :) Awesome start!