WOAH.. 0_o that was the most erotic thing I've read here in fiction.. XD
but I like it though, how twisted their relationship is.. I wonder what's going to happen..XD update soon!

This was a great first chapter. Very well written, i really enjoyed reading.Mary is not the typical character that frequent stories like this, she is interesting, in depth, intriuging. The relationship between her and justin is a fresh and exciting twist on a good old cliche. I want to know what happens next.

Update soon please?

xoxo

This was slimply amazing! I hope you'll update it sometime soon.

Seriously! i love that you take cliches but you add a different twist in them! The step-sibling relationship but how they hate each other and use each other at the same time. So that awesome. The reader is so captivated by your writing!
Update ANY of your stories! Please!:P

RtN

i really like the plot and characters hope you continue

ok!i didn't really expect the plot was going to take this turn.please update your story.i am looking forward to it.

well that's interesting
had a feeling it was going to happen, but it was still a shock when it happened
i like it so far
can't wait for more

izzie

Aw...great story! update hehe


xx

I really liked this and it is such a refreshing story to read. I also enjoy your writing style it really draws you into the story. So, not like a majority of stories on here. I love how the girl is not virginal, I get so sick of reading those stories. I hope you do continue this.

I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

Aw =/ That's kind of sad.
I get the feeling Justin wants more of her, that maybe he's not such a dick.
I don't know. :P
Update soon!

Even though I expected them to be sleeping together (minus the actual sleeping), your writing style/story line still surpised me.

And what's really nice is that it's not a good girl - bad boy story... Who doesn't wat to be a bad girl? ;)

You should continue the story.

What the hell, I thought they hated one another and then bam, their having sex lol. Oh my god, im so excited for this story now. Please, update asap!

I love new beginnings! So excited to see that you have so many new stories up. It's fantastic! This ones in amazing, totally twisted, yet completely sane. I can't wait to see where it goes.