You are as every bit good, if not better a poet compared to your stories. This has got to be one of my true favourites out of the lot =] I love the imigary and personification. And if i were to read this whilst walking i probably would have tripped or walked into a wall.

Cause you know. You do that to me.

Im getting ** off at Fp because its not alerting me about your stuff - Im sorry this didnt come sooner.

And like you said before about mine, the emotion behind this is raw, and i love it.

Amazing