wow. You are a great writer. Keep it comming, next chapter please! Dont listen to anyone who raggs on you they are so just stupid and wish they could write better. Keep writing

Update soon.

Poor thing. =(

The man shounds very nice, a bit ...perfect though.

Alena is a bit of a **. Lol
Still, I can understand her situation. Pretty kick **.

can't wait to read more, keep it comming.

Oh this sounds good. I like the character detail with a good mix of description. The dialogue is done well too. I'll watch this through I do believe.