This story has a nice beginning and I would love to see it continued. I would also like to see a little more detail and a little slower pace- building the emotion, building the reality.

I love it. It's smart and surprisingly realistic. --Especially the speech. I'll definitely be waiting for more.

Good start. This is just my opinion, but maybe you should change the names? Rosalie sounds more like a gypsy name.

I like it. XD I'm sure a lot of other readers do too. =) I love the middle ages theme. XD

I hope you update soon. XD it'll be a fun and joyous journey for the two lovely girls. xD

this is a very interesting beginning. I can't wait to see what happens!

Wow! This story is good. I would like to read more of it. I'm actually writing one that is somewhat similiar to yours, however, it has many more characters and...well, I could send it to you if you want. But please, no plagurising. :P :) Anyways, I would indeed like to read more of your story. It is very interesting.