 Kalista Jia 2009-04-18 . chapter 1It is very well written. Beautiful in fact. Love the details.
I shall list my favorite parts:
Grew up without a stench of pride,
Untrained to become proper,
Devil disguises a friendly smile,
Testing them with careless words,
I enjoy the imagery in there as well. The description is dark and lovely (I am evil)
Very well done. Good job. |