This story is so awesome! I get a kick out of all Aiden's and Mack's comebacks. They're so freaking good! And I love their chemistry too. Please update soon.

im not quite understanding the layout of the house. isnt macs room in the basement? if thats so, where did her father take aiden?

Interesting...hm. I likes. =] I think this is going great and I can't wait for the next chapter. You have on a line it seems. please update soon.
frizzle

Heheh =]. He is EVIL, I like him. ^^ Why does she have such a hard wall. Her dad seems nice. He lied to her dad though. Mack gets really bugged by him doesn't she? Still not sure what to make of Mack or Aiden. Update soon, please? =]
frizzle

lol i ahvent laughed this hard while reading in a long time. my ultimate fave quote in here is when mack is telling aiden that she wants him. dead. lol i love that so much. i might just use that. lol just on my real life. i wouldn't write it. but yeah im alerting and favoriting your story. update soon~

"I'm Karen Smith and there's a *glances down at left breast* 30% chance it's already raining outside!"

Omg, Love it! Nice re-do. Please update your others stories! the suspense is killing me!

gr...evil llama hand puppet armies with dance on bud light with the kroger employees if u don't!

so far, so good!
I think the revised plot will take the charectors in a new directiom!
:)