hm, It says: "repeat chorus 1 time" but I dunno where the chorus is. Great song anyways.

I really like this! I thought it would be cliched but it's not, it works really well. I would probably layout the song differently, more separated, so readers appreciate the structure of verse and chorus - but I know that FP does like to mess up layout so it is quite difficult lol. Anyway, I really like it, I can imagine it being performed. Nice job ]