oh man! vickis getting agnsty! the world is coming to an end. but i love it ofc :)

Wow as in...O.O This is totally 'bout caleb yes?

This was really cool, vic! One question though: Is 'delovely' a word? (if its not that's ok it worked for the line lol. besides chels makes up words all the time. It's fun.) I really, really liked the ending, it gave the tone a nice little twist.

So cool. well done...umm...yeah you don't add enough new stuff ::glares/pouts::

Yeah I'm a little like "whe!" 'cause its early and I'm actually awake for once. ::looks at time:: ok so mayb not early, early but this is early for me on a Saturday morning when I'm not scheduled to ride.

I'll stop now. Great work on the poem. Me likes very much!
MK ;p (obviously)

My God, you can rhyme...My hat is off to you. Great poem!