 CRaZy-OdIN 2009-02-09 . chapter 1Very moving. But ofcourse I'd expect no less from you. Truely an abominal subject indeed.
p.s. sorry I havent reviewed in ages. |
 najat 2009-02-02 . chapter 1 wow!! the poem is reli gud n very emotional and touching, good work |
 SayIt'sWrong 2009-02-02 . chapter 1Beautiful poem. Very well written. Really emotional. A very beautiful tribute. Well done.
~Vikki x |
 Thomas J. Poe 2009-01-30 . chapter 1Touching. Times really are hard for them at the moment. |
 Jem the writer 2009-01-30 . chapter 1This is very emotionally written, and the snippets of the other language managed to fit in perfectly with the poem.
The meter of the poem seemed a little off balance in some of the stanzas.
Other than that, the emotion was very well written with this and you chose perfect words for such a tragic event.
Keep up the good work,
~JEM~ |
 Spurlunk 2009-01-30 . chapter 1I like this poem. You've captured a mood and a place perfectly, though sadly the time period could be almost anytime in the last fifty years. |