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Reviews For: A Night in Palestine
CRaZy-OdIN 2009-02-09 . chapter 1
Very moving. But ofcourse I'd expect no less from you. Truely an abominal subject indeed.

p.s. sorry I havent reviewed in ages.
najat 2009-02-02 . chapter 1
wow!! the poem is reli gud n very emotional and touching, good work
SayIt'sWrong 2009-02-02 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem. Very well written. Really emotional. A very beautiful tribute. Well done.

~Vikki x
Thomas J. Poe 2009-01-30 . chapter 1
Touching. Times really are hard for them at the moment.
Jem the writer 2009-01-30 . chapter 1
This is very emotionally written, and the snippets of the other language managed to fit in perfectly with the poem.

The meter of the poem seemed a little off balance in some of the stanzas.

Other than that, the emotion was very well written with this and you chose perfect words for such a tragic event.

Keep up the good work,

~JEM~
Spurlunk 2009-01-30 . chapter 1
I like this poem. You've captured a mood and a place perfectly, though sadly the time period could be almost anytime in the last fifty years.
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