|Reviews for the imp impervious|
| bipedalcooney 2/16/09 . chapter 1
"schools of sharklings with hammer teeth and mermaid legs"- Awesome line! Great metaphors in this poem. Keep writing.
| Isca 1/31/09 . chapter 1
"She can’t focus or fondle anything else with enthusiasm until she has this girl." Honest, relatable, and rather enjoyable to read. The final section is full of angst, which was a nice way to end the piece :)