Aww...so dissapointing...not being able to see the conclusion of a story..such a shame, lol :D...First time I've read all of what we did in a couple years, didnt do half bad on it I must say.:) Oh well. Hey, if ya ever wanna pick it back up, I'd be willin to help again, drastic changes and all :) I know you gatta good story in your head, always admired that imagination of yours ;)

interesting prologue. it sets up a bit of the story and leaves a lot unexplained. good job

I'm enjoying this so far. I like how there's a fair balance of science and religion in it too and from what I've seen of the storyline so far it looks like it is going to be a good read!

Thanks for posting it!

Wow, that was a long time ago. I have just read this first part and I already see wording I would change to help it flow. Hm, interesting the difference a couple years make.:)