   Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2009-04-01 . chapter 3intense. Powerful. |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2009-04-01 . chapter 2 Beautifully put. |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2009-04-01 . chapter 1 Sweet. Like how it sets a tone of serenity |
 Isca 2009-01-31 . chapter 3"We're still wrapped in the arms of men who don't love us." I love how this line reflects the struggle some women have to 'fit in,' when really, they just want to be with a woman. Keep up the good work! :) |
| Isca 2009-01-31 . chapter 2 "I reach for the flames, to hack and carve pictures...into the canvas." STUNNING IMAGERY! :D |
| Isca 2009-01-31 . chapter 1 "Then I'll hug you." Aww! That's so sweet! :) |
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