 Allanasha Ke Kiri 2009-11-04 . chapter 4This is interesting. Can't wait to see how you get him working for that guy ... yeah ... lol |
 laurakyna 2009-07-04 . chapter 4more of this one too please! |
 XxnickixX 2009-02-08 . chapter 4nice chapter, update soon! :) |
 XxnickixX 2009-02-07 . chapter 3really like the story! please update soon! :) |
 GoddessOfWrath 2009-02-03 . chapter 2Damn this seems interesting! i just need to read some more but sounds fly so far! |
 JtheChosen1 2009-02-02 . chapter 2very mysterious and suspenseful! excellent work! |
 demonchipmunk 2009-02-01 . chapter 2 Great story,
The character is very real, and although it's still early in the story, the plot seems interesting. Please keep it active, can't wait for the next chapter. |
 XxnickixX 2009-02-01 . chapter 2nice story so far, keep it up, update soon. :) |