Again...AMAZING! Sometimes I feel the same way but LOL I can't drive or anything like that. Just TEEN PROBLEMS ova herr!

:( this is sad. Or else it is sad, but less sad than I am interpreting it as. heh. Wishing... tis a strange thing that men do, but oh so powerful, for they are the only thing that when they dont come true that we notice them. I hope you feel better.

Great job, I love it. So well written.

Faith

"It's never been about the car." Wonderful last line-the deeper message is powerful. I think you should write another chapter to this or a sequel and continue with another look at what the speaker is really going through. :)

I really like the ending line. And how there is a deeper meaing behind the whole thing. The format is really good too. Awesome job! Keep it up!

I love your poetry even though I always feel so helpless after reading it.

-Jessica