incredibly powerful.

especially the end.

ohohOH.

that ending...phenomenal, truly.

the comparison...

"we're both shells of what we used to be"

crazy good :)

This poem is almost... frighting in it ability to be captivating, abhorrent, and upsetting. It's very well written, though.

Your style of writing is very different from most. It's raw and blunt, yet leaves a lot to infer. I like it, even though it's sometimes depressing.

One thing, though, I don't understand the numbers in this pieces.

I do wish I could see your style put to something happy, anything.

Wonderful work, as always.