Reviews for Fragments, Partly
Lilja Ruusu 2/17/09 . chapter 2
Don't think and find no reason

Don't cease and keep from freezing

Those were my favorite lines, I loved how they flowed and I LOVE rhyming!
Lilja Ruusu 2/17/09 . chapter 1
I liked it! it was unique, like a little bit different from everyone else who's all like: "My life sucks and no one loves me." Cool poem!
bipedalcooney 2/1/09 . chapter 1
Great writing! The rhythm of the lines really fits the anxiety in the words. It's pretty rare to find such balance in poetry. Keep writing! I really enjoyed this poem.