| Reviews for Fragments, Partly |
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Lilja Ruusu 2/17/09 . chapter 2Don't think and find no reason Don't cease and keep from freezing Those were my favorite lines, I loved how they flowed and I LOVE rhyming! |
Lilja Ruusu 2/17/09 . chapter 1I liked it! it was unique, like a little bit different from everyone else who's all like: "My life sucks and no one loves me." Cool poem! |
bipedalcooney 2/1/09 . chapter 1Great writing! The rhythm of the lines really fits the anxiety in the words. It's pretty rare to find such balance in poetry. Keep writing! I really enjoyed this poem. |