Aw that was really sad =[
I like it so far though, it sounds like it's going to be really interesting.

As for a title...lol I have no idea. haha that's no help =[

but update soon!

This made me really sad...but it was so good! I like the way you wrote it, and the interaction between Leda and Stephen. I can't think of a better title though, sorry.

But one thing I wish I had known was why he was leaving. It may have added to the story, depending on the reason.

Overall, very nice job.