I love this story. But somehow I always seem to forget to leave a review. That's sad I know but meh-I'm a special person. So on with the review. I loved Kea! She's just so adorable. I also liked how her favorite chocolates were Kit Kat Bars (aka the best chocolates in existence second only to Ferro Rocher :))Kea was a real character and I know from experience that's it's kinda difficult (darn near impossible when you are just starting out) to make a character as real as a person and I must say that you pulled it off beautifully. I love your writing so uhh keep up the good work.

cute story! i had fun reading your story. though it has a bit of a cliche, there is still an original twist in it. glad i stayed up late to read this. so worth it!

ah(:
thhat was soo cutee! at times i really just hated Avery though and then Dales all sweett andd he sounds soo cutee
goshh
why cant there be any actual guys like that in the world?!?!?!
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im sadd now :(
not reallyy
haha
butt anyyways.. i likedd it(: a lot!!
soo yeahh
yaa knoww..keep writing! im reading Baby, I'm Not Finished too so you have to update more often cuz i get all restless and anxious!
haha
greatt book(:
definitly one of my favvs

hahaha aw :)
that was THE most LONGEST oneshot i've ever seen! XD
haha
thanks for this awesome really cute, really cool, really wonderful oneshot!! :D :D :D

I know it's been a while since you posted this one-shot, but I read it for the first time last night and was blown away!

I loved it! Your Being with You story is one of my Favorites and I don't know how I missed this one-shot when browsing your other stories.

I frequently check the authors of my Favorite Stories, but seemed to have missed you! Forgive me, but I'm making up for it now. I'll be sure to check out more of your stories and praise them just as much as this one because I'm sure they are just as amazing.

XD

--Emer.

i absolutely adored this!

cute.:D

This took me ages to read, but it was worth it! Great work! :)

Very sweet. LOL I really hate people with high metabolisms. Plus I liked how you threw in how her grades had improved. Nice story.

wow, i loved it.
well i loved it enough to wanna write you a review even though i suck at reviewing and that i'm not so sure about my writing-english skills (and that i hate internet so much for having supress my first review before i can post it).
but still, i'm doing it. because the story was lovely, the characters so well drawn, i even loved the fact that it was a one shot and not a bunch of short chapters. i read it till 2.30am yesterday and it is a proof of how much i was taken into the story because i usually like my sleep more than anything else.
and now, i'm craving after kit kat.
be sure i'll read your other stuffs, maybe without reviewing them because this isn't my thing but, well, we'll see.

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That was so cute! :) I love her obsession with chocolate. Haha! She has very good taste. ;D

i love this story from the moment i read about her randomness!!
kudos for one very long but very worthwhile one shot xD
-BM&R

This was nice. It was sort of refreshing.
And I really liked how you made this story.

that was a great story
good job