I have to say I prefer this story a whole lot more to They Call It Karma.!.
I am a little ticked off that she never did tell him that she saw him kissing ze **(Mali) and he never told her how kissing her brought him clarity.
One day if you do a rewrite I hope you put that in somewhere.
I know your trying to show that because of that situation it made all the problems seem minor and all but I just feel that it is an important part that is missing.
Have to say tho I wish I had a gay bf just like James.!.
Who doesn't love the bastard :P

Great story and I hope to read more of your works :)

OMG this was such a cute story! I loved it. Your plot was unique and I just loved the Tynan and Rellie interactions, SO CUTE!! I will admit at times I was unsure if i liked where it was going (with the whole Leigh in the begining), but i never could bring myself to stop reading it, because I knew that in the end it would be a happy ending. Great Job! I want to read more from you. I already read about Creston and Essa, also good by the way =) so be prepared! =) keep writing you got it.

ARGH! Love this story so much.
Though i was waiting for a twilight(ish) ending with Aura waking up in a hospital bed but this ending still is perfect for me.
I wish i can get more of this story!

can you do epilogue 2?? please?? i loved this story...all you have to write is that they had many babies and happy happy life together! thanks for the story =]]

i thoroughly enjoyed this story. i always REALLY REALLY LOVE the stories where the main girl and guy enter into a fake relationship. despite knowing the happily ever after ending is inevitable, i can't help but get really hooked. absolutely LOVED it :) and i gotta say that you can tell that your writing skills improved HEAPS with this story. you structured it really well with the fluttering back and forth between scenarios without being choppy - i wouldn't mind reading this as a massive novel !

anyway, i found a few errors and such..
chapter 1 'literally a boy is a girl's body' --> 'literally a boy IN a girl's body'
chapter 4 'this is anything remotely close' --> 'this ISN'T anything..' or 'this is NOTHING..'
chapter 5 'each piece were there' --> 'each piece there was same..'
'multi-task between chopping to checking' --> 'multi-task between chopping AND checking'
'men that could cook' --> 'men WHO could cook'
chapter 6 'pass within time' --> 'pass WITH time'
chapter 7 'into james chest' --> 'into james' chest'
chapter 10 'but rather amusing' --> 'but THE rather amusing'
'relationship would have failed' --> 'relationship would fail'
'actor that appeared' --> 'actor who appeared'
chapter 18 'of the cirumstanced between' --> 'CIRCUMSTANCES'
'trying to .' --> looks like you haven't finished that sentence !
'effort in to avoid him' --> 'effort into avoiding him' OR 'effort in avoiding him'
chapter 20 'blonde himbo' --> 'BIMBO'
chapter 21 'seemed to have darker to an ocean blue --> 'DARKENED'
chapter 22 'she had been thought' --> 'she had been THROUGH'
'even though james' wasn't' --> 'even though JAMES'
'you're boyfriend' --> 'YOUR boyfriend'
'was to be loved' --> 'was being loved'

thanks again, you're a fab writer :)

jes

Aw, that was such a cute ending! And Chris has got to be the most amazing boyfriend ever! He’s so wonderful and cares so much for Essa! And James is the best friend she could have! Agh I love the ending!

oh my gosh...its over?? i feel so sad...i think this was a fantastic story..
i hope 2 start another story...i just love these characters...
the fact that james didnt curse leigh out or throw a chair at him makes me sad...
but its okay u made up 4 it with this beautiful epilogue...
i hope u start another story soon...i cant w8 2 read another story...
BY THE GREAT JUST MYSTICAL



btw.. u have a few errors...estrogen is not supposed 2 have an O in frony of it...and i think in that same paragraph u spelled explain wrong... i suggest u go through spell check...
good luck in the future...
REMEMBER THAT I AM UR DEVOUTED FAN...
luv ya PEACE

Perfect ending. Enough said!
Can't wait for your next story.
p.s Tynan will always be in my heart.

Aw :-) cute story and cute ending. I know you've had this story out for a while but it took me a while to get to reading this I kept getting destracted. I went back and reread (for the third time) TCIK before reading this. I love both stories by the way :-) awesome stories and great characters

That was an awesome ending! I loved it! I loved this whole story!

this feels strange that the story has finally ended. I loved this epilogue!

Aw. I liked this ending. It was very sweet. Great job! :-)

Sequel!

Ha, I loved this :)
It was sweet (& cheesy) but awesome! It was the ending Chris & Aura deserved! I smiled the whole time I read this :)
Aw, James is a sweetheart. I love him, he's an awesome supporting character teehee.
I think you should do a story on him next (hint) haha.
Can't wait to read whatever you're planning to write next :)

I loved this story! Great work, I'm glad there was a happy ending! :D