aw! i REALLY wasnt gonna cry. i was trying so hard not too...
but i did! and it sucks cuz i have a cold right now and so my runny nose is 2 times worse :P lol

oh good, i'm so glad he came back. great story ~ Alenor

Noah has died... No, Noah is alive and well! Thank you very much for this lovely twist, and yay, Noah and Ayzlin have reunited. Yippee!

I'd been dying to read some military stories. Wow, and I'm happy that I've discovered yours. :)

OH MY GOD I cant stop crying.. I was feeling extremely lonely and decided to find a story to read.. damn glad i chose this one..
Willie Hiller is in the US army and I'm deep in love with him... I cant stop crying becasue.. less than a week ago Willie shipped out to Iraq... I miss him so much, and reading your story showed me its haard for everyone .. also, its soo insane how similar this story is to our relationship.. Willie has been stationed in North Carolina for the last year and a half.. we met a long time ago in high school (im a senior) and started talking more recently..I've never actually been with Willie as lovers.. but I know I love him. I hate to admit it, but we broke up 2 weeks before he left, I feel so horrible about it...I feel like I'm that stupid chick Noah was with blah not a happy thought...
.. Willie and I talked all night, before he left and through many tears I managed to tell him something.. “Just do me a favor and don’t be brave over there, okay? You are my world now, and by coming home, you can give me what you want.”
is pretty much exactly what I told him..When I read that line.. I couldnt help but start sobbing even more .. (I know im so pathetic!!) ... I miss him so much and I hope to God that he comes back to me safe and that we can have a life together...
Thank you for a great story.

That was really an amazing story. They felt like such real people. I knew you couldn't kill Noah. That would have ruined the whole story for me. I'm just glad to see them reunited. I guess what he went through was not good. I love military stories too. I don't really find a lot of them on here. But anyway good Job. I'll definitely come back and read more of your stories when I get more time.

That was amazing, I am now bawling, so excellent job!

this was really good! i'm glad he came back! so good! i love your stories! :D

great story well done. will look forward to your next story thank you

O - M - G!

Do NOT make me cry before work!

That was beautiful! Excellent job and beautifully written! I absolutely loved it!

AMAZING

my lonely tear will join yours then. It was wonderful. I was just wondering if we'll ever know if we'll find out what happened to Noah when he's MIA, just a thought...

omg i honestly thought he was dead i was so upset, but the end of the chapter was so sweet, now i'm happy again!

OMG You're going to kill him, aren't you? (Pulling my hair out). No, don't tell me. And you have to finish this! I think I'm going to have to email you now and demand you don't kill him!

Great chapter BTW. I liked it.

Well even though you didn't like this chapter I loved it! It is soo good! Don't pull it! I mean this works for a short story, I like it! :D :D :D :D :D