 jgood27 2009-11-12 . chapter 13love this story please update soon |
 EsA-lOcA 2009-10-21 . chapter 13ive read both of these storiies and i gotta admit they AWSUME! keep writeing! |
 BoxCut 2009-09-22 . chapter 11I love this story! Thanks for updating(: . |
 PyroTech 2009-09-22 . chapter 13now go help the other twin Jin!1 lol |
 MAGICAL.NARRATOR. 2009-09-22 . chapter 13I love when this story heats up because when it's good... it's real good.
great job. And I'm happy to see that Chi is a little back to normal... for the moment. I could only take so much of the insane chi. lol.
=] |
 CheetoFlavoredLove 2009-09-22 . chapter 13BREAKOUT! I can't wait for what else is going to happen! |
 Scarlet Hyacinth 2009-09-21 . chapter 13Sigh... It would seem that as much as I am voting for a happy ending, it really isn't meant to be for these to. Poor Chi and poor Hyun. At least Jin is trying to make it better, although I doubt he'll manage. Sigh again. |
 xdinoxcorex 2009-09-21 . chapter 13Uh oh. Not going back? That's suspicious hahaha. |
 PyroTech 2009-09-17 . chapter 12oh no...he didn't even read that shit...granted he was drunk and drugged...hn...I keep screaming in my head NO! and GET BACK TOGETHER IDIOTS!...i don't think any of that is working lol |
 SilverBlood17 2009-09-17 . chapter 12OMG! Thank you, thank you, thankyouthankyouthankyou!
I am so honored that you dedicated a chapter to me.
I consider myself lucky that you find my reviews useful and in any way good. I promise to keep writing them as long as I can.
First, thank you for writing a new chapter, as always, I liked it. That was a very shocking beginning. I would not have imagined poor Chi suffering so much. It totally breaks my heart in a million pieces seeing him so affected by the way his family has treated him and the loss of the love of his life. It is really painful to see they have broken an essential part of him. Still, great section. I loved the way he is so defenseless and small (in the psychological way) I think you are doing a great job with Chi’s character. However, and this is a personal request, do not completely break him…please? In all the rest concerning Chi, keep going you are great!
Now, Bambi… I LOATHE HIM! Yes, I know I said I was beginning to deal with him but please… How could he betray Hyun? Arghh! I also dislike Suyong, as in really hate him. Still, analyzing this form an objective point of view they are great antagonists. They are not directly related to the protagonists therefore they are an exterior threat, a new twist in the problems of the twins. Bambi had a double face that, even though I did not liked him, I would never had thought that he would be so heartless. Great depiction of the “evil” side with those two.
Hyun, Hyun, Hyun… I am absolutely, utterly, completely dreading the future of Hyun as a host. I hope he will find a way out of Suyong clutches. I feel for him because I can sense in the way you depict him the myriad of feeling that he has right now. The deep sorrow, the bottled-up love that cannot be given, uselessness, rejection, regret… I can go on. The way you write may be simple but is powerful. I can truly feel that he does not think there is a way out or a solution to his actual situation. Absolutely great work. Keep working with him. You are giving him new possibilities and a great character always need them.
Hope to hear from you soon. Thank you again for considering me to dedicate this chapter. You cannot know how much I appreciate it. Anything you need that I can provide do not doubt in contacting me. And as always; Take Care and my Best Whishes!
Let the Muse FLY! |
 katyaudrey 2009-09-17 . chapter 12i have words...
except that i might castrate you if you don't update this soon. |
 Aneesha 2009-09-16 . chapter 12o i wonder what's going to happen next, Excellent chapter, thanks forwriting! :D |
 xdinoxcorex 2009-09-16 . chapter 12OH NO NOW HE'S A PROSTITUTE.
And poor Chi. Everyone thinks he's crazy :(
You totally killed my boredom by updating, thank you so much! |
 Faith Adeline 2009-09-16 . chapter 12I love Chi XD |
 SilverBlood17 2009-09-16 . chapter 11First of all, and as always, I love how you write and I loved this chapter.
However, I owe you an apology for waiting so long to write this review (University and work is killing me). Now… this chapter was simple but really good. As I have expressed before I have some problems with Bambi, not that I hate him, I simply have not fully accepted him. Nevertheless, I liked him a little better in this chapter. He is hyper and somewhat obnoxious but he was not so pushy and I liked that.
On another topic I am really feeling Chi’s pain right now, you almost made me cry, my eyes watered so much. I admire the way you are portraying him and the deepness and layering you are doing with this character. The way you are depicting him is simply exquisite. Please continue to present such a deep psychological and emotional rawness in Chi the way you are doing it. I would LOVE to see him happy but I feel that some issues have to be resolved. As I have said before I trust you and love the way you write. I will be patient and loyal to your story.
I also enjoy the simple but important part you have given to the character of Jin. I liked him since he began supporting the relationship of the twins and I adore him now that he has saved Choon.
You have been doing a great work with this story. Even though I would like to have an update every day I am very happy with what you have accomplished until now. Keep working and do not falter in your decisions. Keep up the excellent work and know that you have loyal fans that are 100% behind you in this road. I will be waiting for the next chapter. Take Care and, as always, my Best Wishes. |