I really really like this peice. I love the imagery that your able to create..But I guess most of your poetry is like that. I absolutely love when you talk about him holding your heart in his hands. To me that gives a sense of vulnerability to the poem and to the topic..Like he could just clench his fist and crush you at any minute. Very beautiful and poised and again LOVE the imagery.

Oh my goodness!! you have no idea how much i can relate to this! Your poem ...this poem is absolutley amazing!!

This sounds like painful complaints about being wrapped around some guy's finger, but he either leads you on or takes advantage of you.

It's kind of sad. It seems very realistic and heartfelt, though, which is good. It makes it more personal.

I like the first stanza the most.
Very pretty [:

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Katie