that was really good.. some words i'd never thought of using... need to keep in mind... hehe... i love the images... everything is so beautiful! love it... =]

Hi, 'memeber me!? Been a while.

This was a beautiful verse about the winter scenery, and I love the writing format you used. My only problem with it is "Trees" in the 4th stanza. It just...doesn't seem to fit right. I think either the 's' at the end needs to be dropped or an apostrophe needs to be used. Just my thoughts.

I enjoyed this, it's very beautiful. I love how your subject morphs constantly, and illustrate the change from fall to winter. This flowed nicely, and the descriptions were good at adding to the scene. Nice work!
~mAg

Beautiful imagery!

Makes me wish winter was near...i liked how the diction represented change the snow brought by using dreary diction at the start and turned it beautiful by the end.

Wow. This is really good!

Pretty poem. I would change "expanding into a form huge white mass." to "Expanding to form a huge white mass", as the former doesn't really make much sense. Regardless, good job. It paints a nice picture of winter.

i could picture it...=]
good poem

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My goodness! Needa S! What happened to all your marvelous works? Where are they?
*tear*
:(

Anywho
Wow beautiful imagery. I loved it. Your comparisons were perfect.

"Grayish clouds started to fly." I don't know what it is about this line, but I found it awkward.

That's really all I picked out. Great job, once again, beautiful.

~Luna Turner

Very vivid. Cool write.

Sounds like a calm winter! Excellent work!

I think this is the first piece of yours that isn't religious. I like that because it's an interesting change. It's nice to see you do something different.

The piece is nice, your descriptions of the scene is really beautiful. Plus, I like winter, it's my favorite season so I like poems about it. Your word choice was nice as well.

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Wonderful write. I can't say that I'm a fan of winter, but your poem definitely excentuates the parts of it that I do like (once a year! :)). Beautiful imagery and descriptions. Keep writing and God bless, k.

Beautiful poem anlong with an even more beautiful image. I bet it is easpecially beautiful where you are.

I love this poem, lol, I love winter! Beautifully done. I can just imagine it. . Where I live, we dont get much of a winter, I miss it SO much. Thank you for this:) Anyway, thank you also for your kind reviews. They are encouraging; it's nice to hear soemone likes them.:) May God bless you. Enjoy the winter!:)