aww! poor pan!
wills just an asshole.
i like dusty though, hope they end up together.
pan deserves it!
but yeah...
cant wait for the next chapter!
update soon =]

Great chapter! I like Dusty... and I imagine how weird must Pan feel about it... he wants to like him but at the same time he doesn't. Is Dusty gay? bi? or just confused? And what's up with Will? Hope you update soon! :)

Awesome chapter. I had to reread most of the story to remember what it was about, but that just means I got to relive the amazing-ness. I like Dusty. I want Pan to rub Dusty in Will's face (for a while, but eventually end up with Will). I like the fact that all those names are regular words more than names. Just thought I'd mention that :)

YAY you updated! Omaha is kinda funny. Dusty is cute as hell too. Poor Pan, Will broke his heart. Update soon poolease and great chapter!

Oh man, who is this Dusty? Care to elaborate. It’s interesting that your story has taken a turn and now it’s different. I’d like to see where it goes. I feel conflicted about whether Pan should be with Will because they have history together and d** if Pan and Will don’t just sound –right. Kinda like Pan and Wendy only Pan and Will, heh.

Meh, I’m liking this Dusty, though quite differently from either Will or prickly Pan. Update for virtual cookies!

What a lovely little Dustylicious cliffhanger. I think I'd like a pocket Dusty. I'm not really sure where everythng is ging and that's fun. I thought of course that Will and Pan would end up back together at some point, but not there is lovely golden boy. But, Will is stil hanging around, so not sure where his story would go without Pan. Of course you know all of thes answers and will not tell me and will make me wait for the next chapter, because you are a sadist. I love it.

Interesting development! A new and important character has appeared and he is capable of making Pan forget a little bit about Will. I'm sure there's a lot of drama filled chapters in the horizon. I like Dusty XD and I can't wait to see what you have planned for the story! :)

Did Dusty so that on purpose? Oh man poor Pan, I hope things eventually work out for him. Great Chapter!

I really like this story so far. I hadn't read it previously, so I'm not sure what the new direction is as compared to a previous direction, but this is good. I was terribly sad when Will moved away. There have been a number of intense scenes like that, which are just really realistic and kinda captivating. I'm really interested in learning more about Pan and his group and New Kid. And of course I want to see what Will does with Pan walking away from him. Great story, can't wait for updates.

I don't like this New Kid. >;

I'm glad Pan was so angry. I hate when people write reunions similar to Will & Pan's to be happy, when in reality it would pan out just as this one did. I know I'd be as angry as Pan was! So, I really liked that.
I'm really interested to see where you go with this 'new kid' bit. Obviously he is significant. Boyfriend, possibly? That's my guess, at least. Maybe Pan was angry partly because he feels guilty to be with this new boy? I make too many assumptions.
Well, keep up the good work & I'll keep on reviewing. :)

I haven't read the other verison, but I really like the story, it's very creative, thanks for updateing!! Oh and happy belated Valentines day, hope it was good.

I do enjoy this story! Very much, actually. That kiss just made me sad because I know exactly how it is to have that kiss that's been building up for years and to feel all that desperation to just be so close to that other person. And I know how it is to have that happiness taken away just as quickly.

BUT NOW I'M SO ANXIOUS FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. Mega cliffhanger. I just want to know how each of them is going to react. Can't wait to read the next installment! :D

omgomgomgomg. im so excited. will is gonna see pan all grown up now! how cute.

That was so sad. It almost made me cry. Will's gonna come back, right? He has to come back!