Wow...where did THAT come from, friend? Is that creative writing class paying off? If so, count me in next semester!

Good job! *two thumbs up*

~Meg

I like how you make Freedom and Rum into people and hint at what could free her is but don't bluntly put it out there.

OH, this is god :] it sounded a little child molestory but it's good nonetheless hahaha :D